Big picture thought: I think these pages are strongest when we resist the urge to explain every layer. The imagery is already doing so much, so I want the copy to act more like small chapter markers than narration.

For example, on The Commons I love keeping ARRIVAL / GATHER / RETREAT because they feel like choreography within the world. Then THE COMMONS can simply name the world once, with one line underneath, and the rest can breathe.

Basically: less script, more signal. Let the work do the heavy lifting and only use words when they help orient, deepen, or prove something.

AGAIN-no formatting with added text-just putting it in where I think it should go.

EMOTION SYSTEM : THE COMMONS — ARRIVAL / GATHER / RETREAT